Incorrect: Eating food is important to human, for it provides us energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be eaten raw, cooked or even in a canned form, and it is important to make sure these are eaten in moderation.

Correct: Consuming food is important for humans, as it provides us with energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be consumed raw, cooked, or even in canned form; however, it is important to ensure they are consumed in moderation.

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