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The differences between American🌐 and British English

🇺🇸 US 🇺🇸 🇬🇧 UK 🇬🇧

🇺🇸Eraser 🇬🇧Rubber
🇺🇲Cell phone 🇬🇧Mobile phone
🇺🇲Candy 🇬🇧Sweets
🇺🇲Sneakers 🇬🇧Trainers
🇺🇲Trousers 🇬🇧Pants
🇺🇲Mailman 🇬🇧Postman
🇺🇲Vacation 🇬🇧Holiday
🇺🇲Airplane 🇬🇧Aeroplane
🇺🇲Last name 🇬🇧Surname
🇺🇲Subway 🇬🇧Underground
🇺🇲Apartment 🇬🇧Flat
🇺🇲First floor 🇬🇧Ground floor
🇺🇲Flashlight 🇬🇧Torch
🇺🇲Picture 🇬🇧Photo
🇺🇲Fries 🇬🇧Chips
🇺🇲Gasoline 🇬🇧Petrol
🇺🇲Sidewalk 🇬🇧Pavement
🇺🇲Truck 🇬🇧Lorry
🇺🇲Highway 🇬🇧Motorway
🇺🇲Fall 🇬🇧Autumn
🇺🇲Elevator 🇬🇧Lift
🇺🇲Cookie 🇬🇧Biscuits
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#Essay #Writing #Task3
☘️Discuss both views

🔰 Q: Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

📄 Answer:

Personal and public health are tightly related to food choices. While some people believe that the government should regulate nutrition to ensure public wellness, others argue that it should be people’s decision whether to pursue a healthy diet or not. This essay will discuss both points of view and explain why the authorities should not control the types of food people can buy.

Legislators could impose laws concerning nutritious food in an effort to have a healthier population, hence decreasing public health costs. Even if this could be considered a good idea, it would be very hard to implement. To achieve this target, the officials could impose a levy on unhealthy foods, or reduce their availability on the market. In Italy, for example, products such as carbonated sugary drinks and chips are heavily taxed. As a result, the sales of these items have decreased. However, if the authorities start to take control of what their citizens can or cannot eat, it may be deemed as curtailing customers’ freedom.

Personal freedom is seen as an extremely important human right. Therefore, many people think that only they should decide what food and drink they consume, and that it is wrong for governments to interfere with their personal choices. Doing so can indeed lead to public discontent. Alternatively, a better approach would be to launch awareness-raising campaigns about a healthy diet so that people would be able to make better-informed dietary decisions themselves.

All in all, authorities can exercise power to limit the selection of foods people have access to, but that would not be without consequences. Instead, governments should invest in education programs to educate people how they can improve their health simply through making wiser decisions about what they eat.

✍️ Total words: 292

Band: 7.5+✅

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📺 WORK FOR YOUR DREAMS - Powerful Study Motivation

Overview: Stay disciplined, work hard, always believe in your dreams and go after them!


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🔰IELTS Reading
Yes, No, Not Given Questions


Yes, No, Not Given questions are common in the IELTS Reading test. There’s a good chance you’ll get one of these or a True/False/Not Given question which is very similar.

It’s important that you understand the difference between the two so here’s a quick explanation.


❗️Yes/No/Not Given vs True/False/Not Given questions
The difference is in the type of information contained in the text.

1⃣ Yes/No/Not Given – the text will contain the opinions, views or beliefs of the writer or other people who are mentioned.

2⃣ True/False/Not Given – the text will contain factual information about a topic.

Explanation

For Yes/No/Not Given questions, you will be given a set of statements and a text. Your task is to decide which of the following applies to the information in each statement:

📍it agrees with the views of the writer – YES (Y)
📍it disagrees with or contradicts what the writer thinks – NO (N)
📍it is impossible to know what the writer’s point of view is – NOT GIVEN (NG)


Top tips for Y/N/NG

1) The answers appear in the same order in the text as the order of the statements.

2) You don’t need to read the whole text. First, you will scan for keywords and then you’ll read in detail the section in which they're located to find the answer.

3) Watch out for distractors. Be aware that the test setters love to use ‘distractors’ to really test you. A prime example is qualifying words such as:
every a few
all always
some often
most occasionally


These single words can completely change the meaning of a sentence.

E.g. Julio often goes to the gym after work.
Julio occasionally goes to the gym after work.


In Y/N/NG questions, the meaning of the statement must be an exact match with the opinion of the writer for the answer to be YES.

4) Also be on the lookout for qualifying words that express possibility or doubt such as:

seem claim
suggest possibly
believe probably


Again, they can totally alter the meaning of a statement.

E.g. He claimed that profits had gone up by 10%.
He knew that profits had gone up by 10%.

5)
The view or opinion of the writer may not be immediately clear from the text. You may have to determine this through what they say.

6) The statements will contain synonyms and paraphrasing so be on the lookout for these.

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✌️CONVERSATION OPENING.
✌️НАЧАЛО БЕСЕДЫ.
✌️SUHBATNING BOSHLANISHI.


🇬🇧What's new?
🇷🇺Какие новости?
🇺🇿Nima yangiliklar?

🇬🇧How is your family?
🇷🇺Как семья?
🇺🇿Oilangiz qanday?

🇬🇧How is your mother?
🇷🇺Как ваша мама?
🇺🇿Onangiz ahvollari qanday?

🇬🇧How is your wife?
🇷🇺Как ваша жена?
🇺🇿Ayolingiz ahvollari qanday?

🇬🇧How is your husband?
🇷🇺Как ваш муж?
🇺🇿Eringizni ahvollari qanday?

🇬🇧Are you O.K.?
🇷🇺Все у вас в порядке?
🇺🇿Hammasi joyidami?

🇬🇧Fine, thanks.
🇷🇺Прекрасно, спасибо.
🇺🇿Yaxshi, rahmat.

🇬🇧Very well.
🇷🇺Очень хорошо.
🇺🇿Juda yaxshi.

🇬🇧Not bad.
🇷🇺Неплохо.
🇺🇿Yomonmas.

🇬🇧O.K.
🇷🇺Нормально.
🇺🇿O'rtacha.

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Everyday Idiom 🔋 | #idiom

Keep a low profile
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[To avoid attracting attention to yourself]

- He has been in a little trouble recently so he is trying to keep a low profile.

- I cannot go to the party, I am just keeping a low profile so I can finish my research by the deadline.

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IELTS Synonyms 8+ 🔥
Alternatives of 5 words to enrich your vocabulary

💊CHANGE
alter; transform; replace; diversify; adjust; adapt; modify; remodel; vary; evolve; transfigure; redesign; refashion; advance; transition; shift; adjustment.

🏺OLD
aged; ancient; matured; elderly; senior; veteran; decrepit; seasoned; venerable; past one’s prime; doddering; senile.

🔭THINK
ponder; reflect; conceive; imagine; contemplate; consider; determine; realize; visualize; guess/assume; conclude; envision.

🧼FUNNY
comical; ludicrous; amusing; droll; entertaining; absurd; hilarious; silly; whimsical; hysterical; joking; witty; facetious; slapstick; side-splitting; knee-slapping.

💈GO
move; proceed; advance; progress; travel; walk; journey; depart; exit; flee; make one’s way; clear out; get underway.

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🌐 Siz bilishingiz kerak bo'lgan 20 ta so'z:

🔸actual - haqiqiy
🔸amaze - hayratda qoldirmoq
🔸charge - narx
🔸comfort - taskin bermoq, ovutmoq
🔸contact - aloqaga chiqmoq
🔸customer - haridor
🔸deliver - elitmoq, yetkazmoq
🔸earn - pul ishlab topmoq
🔸gate - darvoza
🔸include - o'z ichiga olmoq
🔸manage - boshqarmoq
🔸mystery - sir, junboq
🔸occur - sodir bo'lmoq
🔸opposite - teskari, zid
🔸plate - likop
🔸return - qaytmoq
🔸reward - mukofot, sovrin
🔸set - qo'ymoq, o'rnatmoq
🔸steal - o'g'irlamoq
🔸thief - o'g'ri


#Vocab #Useful #Important
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🔎 Ingliz tilida pol, yer, quruqlik, maydon, hudud ma'nolarini beruvchi so'zlar:

🔹️floor - the surface that you walk on when you are indoors (xona, binoning pastki yurish qismi, pol)
🔹️ground - the surface that you walk on when you are outdoors (xona, binodan tashqari hududning yurish qismi (yer, maydon)
🔹️grounds - the area surrounding and belonging to a school, hospital, hotel, stately home, etc, usually enclosed by a wall or fence (binoning atrofidagi yerlar)
🔹️land - an area of ground that is owned or used by someone, or that is controlled by a particular country (yer, maydon)
🔹️territory - the area that is controlled by a particular country, army or power (hudud, mamlakat)
🔹️soil - the material in which plants and trees grow (tuproq)
🔹️earth - the world on which we live (Yer planetasi)

#Vocab #Useful
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🔎Ingliz tilida ish, kasb, lavozim va mehnat faoliyati ma'nosidagi so'zlar:

🔹️job - ish, kasb (haq to'lanadigan mehnat faoliyati) Mazkur ma'noda 'job' to'liq yoki yarim stavka ish degan birikmalarda ham ishlatiladi (a full-time or part-time job)
🔹️do (something for a living) - kun kechirish uchun qilinadigan ish degan ma'noda ishlatiladi
🔹️occupation - ish, kasb (mazkur so'z 'job' so'zi bilan bir xil ma'noga ega bo'lsa ham, rasmiy uslubda ishlatiladi va keng tarqalmagan)
🔹️post/position - lavozim (biror bir tashkilotda egallagan o'rin, mavqe ma'nosida kelib, mazkur so'zlar rasmiy ma'noga ega va odatda ko'proq mas'uliyat talab qiladigan ishlarga nisbatan ishlatiladi)
🔹️career - mehnat faoliyati, ish faoliyati
🔹️trade - kasb (odatda qo'l mehnatiga asoslangan ishlarga nisbatan ishlatiladi)
🔹️profession - kasb, mehnat faoliyati (odatda, yuqori malaka talab qilinadigan ishlarga nisbatan ishlatiladi)

#Vocab #Useful
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🔎'friend' - do'st so'zi bilan ishlatiladigan birikmalar 2:

🔹a mutual friend - umumiy do'st
🔸They went to a mutual friend’s home for dinner.

🔹a firm friend - qadrdon do'st
🔸They had remained firm friends ever since they first met.

🔹a trusted friend - ishonchli do'st
🔸She told only a few trusted friends.

🔹male/female friends - erkak/ayol do'stlar
🔸Most of my female friends are married now.

🔹have a friend - do'sti bo'lmoq
🔸Suzie has plenty of friends.

🔹become friends - do'stlashmoq
🔸Liz and Vanessa soon became friends.

🔹remain friends - do'st bo'lib qolmoq
🔸We have all remained friends despite some difficult times.

🔹a friend of a friend - do'stimning do'sti
🔸I managed to get tickets from a friend of a friend.

🔹somebody’s circle of friends - kimningdir do'stlari doirasi
🔸Her small circle of friends used to play cards together.

#Vocabulary #Useful
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🌐 Topic: Coming and going

🔹️abroad - chet el
🔹️accommodation - turar joy
🔹️book - kitob, (fe'l bo'lib kelganda buyurtma qilmoq)
🔹️break - sindirmoq, (ot bo'lib kelganda tannaffus)
🔹️cancel - bekor qilmoq
🔹️catch - tutmoq
🔹️coach - turistik avtobus
🔹️convenient - qulay
🔹️crash - avariya
🔹️crowded - tiqilinch
🔹️cruise - katta kema
🔹️delay - kechiktirmoq
🔹️destination - manzil
🔹️ferry - solsimon katta kema
🔹️flight - uchish
🔹️foreign - chet ellik
🔹️harbour - bandargoh
🔹️journey - sayohat
🔹️luggage - bagaj, yuk
🔹️nearby - yaqinida
🔹️pack - joylamoq
🔹️passport - pasport
🔹️platform - platforma
🔹️public transport - jamoat transporti
🔹️reach - yetib olmoq
🔹️resort - kurort
🔹️souvenir - suviner
🔹️traffic - tiqilinch (moshinalarga nisbatan)
🔹️trip - sayohat
🔹️vehicle - transport

#Vocabulary #Useful
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📌Natural disasters - Tabiiy ofatlar:

🔹️Drought - Qurg'oqchilik
🔹️Flood - Suv toshqini
🔹️Forest Fire - O'rmon yong'ini
🔹️Earthquake - Zilzila
🔹️Tsunami - Sunami
🔹️Thunderstorm - Momaqaldiroq
🔹️Volcanic eruption - Vulqon otilishi
🔹️Hurricane - Dovul
🔹️Tornado - Tornado
🔹️Blizzard - Izg'irin, Bo'ron
🔹️Snowstorm - Qor bo'roni
🔹️Extreme heat - Juda issiqlik

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#Essay2 #Writing #Task2
☘️Agree/Disagree

🔰Q:Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

📄Answer
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Education is extremely essential for an individual to live a successful and comfortable life. The countries with better literacy rate are usually more economically stable. Having said that, the right to self-determination is a basic fundamental right guaranteed to every citizen by the constitution, therefore, I strongly disagree to apply a blanket uniform law to everyone and force them to stay in the school till they reach the age of majority.

The first reason is, by mandating school we will deprive pupils of free choice. If we make children part of the decision-making process this will enhance their confidence and raise their confidence. These adolescents are the biggest stakeholders and they are the future of any country. Any decision relating to the youth must be done with all interested parties. For example, in countries that mandate compulsory military service for their young population, their armies are not as disciplined as compared to the countries with regular armies. Norway is just an example, where all Norwegian citizens are required to complete military training, after school. Their military power is nowhere near the USA or the UK, where people who have an aptitude for military service apply and go through the recruitment process.

Secondly, there are children who have mental health issues, which are not diagnosed till later age. When parents, force education, on their children because of peer pressure, this usually results in further damage to their self-esteem and mental condition. There is a considerable increase in youth committing suicides for the same reason. For instance, a few months ago a student in Norway jumped off the mountain and ended his life, when investigated, he was under immense pressure by parents to perform better in education, whereas he had no interest in education and wanted to be a musician.

In conclusion, although, education is imperative for children, I sincerely believe, we should never restrict their autonomy, and do not put unnecessary pressure on them to do what they do not want.

✍️ Total words: 330

Band: 8.0+✅

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👨🏻‍💻💬WORDS TO USE INSTEAD OF "VERY"

● very noise 👉🏻 deafening
● very often 👉🏻 frequently
● very old👉🏻 ancient
● very old- fashioned 👉🏻 archaic
● very open 👉🏻 transparent
● very painful 👉🏻excruciating
● very pale 👉🏻 ashen
● very perfect 👉🏻 flawless
● very poor 👉🏻 destitute
● very powerful 👉🏻 compelling
● very pretty 👉🏻 beautiful
● very quick 👉🏻 rapid
● very quiet 👉🏻 hushed
● very rainy 👉🏻 pouring
● very rich 👉🏻 wealthy
● very sad 👉🏻 sorrowful
● very scared 👉🏻 petrified
● very scary 👉🏻 chilling
● very serious 👉🏻 grave
● very sharp 👉🏻 keen
● very shiny 👉🏻 gleaming
● very short 👉🏻 brief
● very shy 👉🏻 timid
● very simple 👉🏻 basic


#Vocabulary
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🔰Vocabulary for family and friends

🔸A lifelong friend – A friend that you have had for most of your life
🔸A relationship of trust – a connection with another in which you have faith and confidence
🔸Arrange a dinner date – Plan to share an evening meal
🔸A shoulder to cry on – Someone to sympathize with you
🔸Close knit family – A close family with common interests
🔸Dear to my heart – Someone that I care about
🔸Distant cousins – People who share a common ancestor but are not closely related
🔸Extend the hand of friendship – Reach out to someone in a friendly manner
🔸Extended family – Uncles, aunts and cousins form part of the extended family
🔸Get to know one another – Learning different aspects of each other
🔸Get together – Meet up
🔸Immediate family – Spouse, parents, children, grandparents
🔸Long lost friend – A friend that you have lost contact with
🔸Long-term relationships – A committed relationship between partners
🔸Professional relationships – The relationships that we have in the workplace
🔸Share a common background – The share a similar heritage or culture
🔸Stand the test of time – To last a long time
🔸Struck up a friendship – To make friends
🔸To enjoy someone’s company – To enjoy spending time with someone
🔸To have a good working relationship – To work together well
🔸To have a lot in common – To have shared interests
🔸To hit it off – To like each other straight away
🔸To keep in touch with – To keep in contact
🔸To lose touch with – To lose contact

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Essays Band 9 dan repost
#Essay #Writing #Task2
☘️Discuss both views

🔰Q:The higher proportion of older population will over take younger generation what is the reason? is it positive or negative development?

📄Answer
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Undoubtedly, it is an absolute truth that senior communities will be skyrocketed dramatically than younglings, is the near future. This would be due to the better-advanced health care system. I, personally, opine that it is non-welcoming development; notwithstanding, the disquisition delves into in-depth grounds, as well as will also explore why I do think so.

Apparently, the main rationale why the statistics of elder citizens will pop up, might because of the better and the advanced medical system. Consequently, researchers, doctors, and scientists have clinched a greater level of success to win against life-threatening diseases; hence, the life span of people is already escalated. An article by GNA (Guardian Newspaper of America), for instance, stated that by 2050, a human being would be able to defeat cancers, and autoimmune disorders, and will lead a longer life. Ergo, older people will live longer than average years.

Conversely, the tendency can be proven as a disadvantageous for youngsters and the governments, if it will succeed. In detail, if they will have the elder crowd, the authorities would have to allocate a major fraction of the nation's budget to the health care system. For example, to take responsibility for baby boomers the executives will have to hire a plethora of health care workers, therefore, other sectors which need remuneration namely education and research will not be progressed. Wherefore, the justification of a more aged population is a clear sign of restricted progression.

To conclude, having explored both standpoints, I recapitulate that due to awareness of fitness, and the ultramodern medical system, the age of the public will be doubled in sooner time; nonetheless, it is evident that such a development is unfortunate for further growth of the community.

✍️ Total words: 285

Band: 8.0+✅

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