Session #n44: LINKING WORDS AND PHRASES
✴️ To make your piece of writing more interesting, you can use a variety of linking words and phrases to join sentences or ideas together.
❌e.g. Joyce has got red hair. She's got freckles .
✔️Joyce has got red hair and freckles.
❌David is a tall man . He is in his late forties.
✔️David is a taff man who is in his late forties.
❌Bridget is an attractive woman. She's got shoulder-length hair.
✔️Bridget is an attractive woman with shoulder-length hair.
❌She is tall. She is thin.
✔️She is both tall and thin.
✴️ You can join descriptions of similar personal qualities by using in addition, also, and, moreover, etc. e. g.
❌She is cheerful. She is always smiling. She always behaves politely.
✔️She is cheerful and is always smiling. Moreover, she always behaves politely.
✴️ You can join descriptions of contrasting qualities by using but, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, etc. e. g.
❌ He is clever and always does well at school. He can be bossy at times.
✔️ He is clever and always does well at school. However, he can be bossy at times.
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