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And in this group, all classes are free and you have the opportunity to learn for free

This is a collection of lessons that will be taught in the IT field in this group

Common mistakes ↙️

• I've done my homeworks❌
• I've done my homework ✔️


• Please give me feedbacks❌
• Please give me feedback✅

• Please write me now in private❌
• Please write to me now in private✅

• It's a beautiful jewellery❌
• It's a beautiful piece of jewellery✅

• They are expensive equipments❌
• They're expensive pieces of equipment✅


Remember the following words are uncountable ↙️
• News, advice, furniture, equipment

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WRITING INTRODUCTION | 1-XATO ✍

Ko’pchilik o’rganuvchilar insho yozishni boshlashga shunchalik ishtiyoqmand bo’lishadiki, ularni savolni juda tez o’qishadi. Savolni juda tez o’qiganliklari tufayli, introductionda uni noto’g’ri paraphrase qilishadi. So’ngra body paragraphs ni yozish paytida esa savoldan yanayam uzoqlashib ketaverishadi. ❌

Bundan ham yomoni, ko’plab o’rganuvchilar faqat savoldagi umumiy mavzuni topishadiyu, yozishni boshlab yuborishadi. Natijada esa, savolda so’ralgan asosiy masala umuman inshoda yoritilmaydi.

Nima qilish kerak?

Savolni shoshmasdan o’qing. IELTSda hech qachon sizdan umumiy mavzuni muhokama qilish so’ralmaydi. Shuning uchun asosiy muhokama mavzusini aniqlamaguningizga qadar savolni o’qing. ☝️

Masalan, quyidagi savolga e’tibor bering:

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


Ko’pchilik bu savolni shoshib o’qishganida, bu savol fast food va uning oqibatida kelib chiqadigan semizlik haqida deb o’ylaydi va inshosini shu haqida yozadi. Afsuski, bu noto’g’ri. 🙅‍♂🙅‍♀

Savolni sinchiklab o’qisangiz, unda sizdan fast foodga soliqni hukumat tomonidan oshirish kerakmi yo’qmi shu narsa so’ralyapti. Inshoyingiz soliqni oshirishga bo’lgan munosabatingizni qamrab olishi kerak. Agarda siz fast foodning zararlari yoki semizlikning oqibatlari haqida yozsangiz, bu OFF-TOPIC hisoblanadi.
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