Incorrect: The health of people is important for there to be a successful society, but often times its not taken seriously enough, and people don't get the care that they need.
Correct: The health of people is important for a successful society; however, it is often not taken seriously enough, resulting in people not receiving the care that they need.
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Correct: The health of people is important for a successful society; however, it is often not taken seriously enough, resulting in people not receiving the care that they need.
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