Most people move to the cities in search of a better life, while, urban life can be tough. From my perspective, the government must make cities more comfortable and better.
There are several reasons why urban life is getting worse. First and foremost, transport systems are vital and developed in most cities, however, they can also produce traffic jams, poor air quality, and gas emissions. For example, in Barcelona, around 65% of people have their own private cars, and these transportation systems are more likely to damage the ozone layer, which leads to climate change. Secondly, in urban areas, clean energy is a big obstacle. Many cities can create clean energy, but they consume tons of their produced green energy, and after some years, the majority of cities start suffering from a lack of clean energy, these are the difficulties of living in a city.
On the other hand, nevertheless,a better life should be provided in cities, but for this, the government and people should try to fix some problems. First and foremost, there are more transports than enough in urban areas, which leads to air pollution however to prevent air pollution and make life special for residents, that's why, countries should find more economically clean transport or put a restriction on transport systems, and people should choose walking or cycling to prevent climate change in the cities, that's primarily because, with better urban transport planning, cities could prevent up to 20% of premature deaths every year. Secondly, the city of the future must be green, such as, urban parks, gardens, and tee-lined streets, with numerous health benefits, for example, stress reduction, longer lives, and improved general well-being and mental health.
In conclusion, everything is in the government's control that's why in modern cities, a better and more inspiring life should be provided for everyone by politicians.
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There are several reasons why urban life is getting worse. First and foremost, transport systems are vital and developed in most cities, however, they can also produce traffic jams, poor air quality, and gas emissions. For example, in Barcelona, around 65% of people have their own private cars, and these transportation systems are more likely to damage the ozone layer, which leads to climate change. Secondly, in urban areas, clean energy is a big obstacle. Many cities can create clean energy, but they consume tons of their produced green energy, and after some years, the majority of cities start suffering from a lack of clean energy, these are the difficulties of living in a city.
On the other hand, nevertheless,a better life should be provided in cities, but for this, the government and people should try to fix some problems. First and foremost, there are more transports than enough in urban areas, which leads to air pollution however to prevent air pollution and make life special for residents, that's why, countries should find more economically clean transport or put a restriction on transport systems, and people should choose walking or cycling to prevent climate change in the cities, that's primarily because, with better urban transport planning, cities could prevent up to 20% of premature deaths every year. Secondly, the city of the future must be green, such as, urban parks, gardens, and tee-lined streets, with numerous health benefits, for example, stress reduction, longer lives, and improved general well-being and mental health.
In conclusion, everything is in the government's control that's why in modern cities, a better and more inspiring life should be provided for everyone by politicians.
307 Words.
#IELTSWRITING #TASK2