Here some sample responses for the IELTS writing task 1 question above:🔸 In 2008, Australia had the highest amount of students with a part-time job, with 14 thousands.
🔸 The quantity of Australian students with a part-time job declined steadily, from 14,000 in 2008 to 11,000 in 2016.
🔸 However, in 2016, Australia decreased and had a figure of 11,000.
🔸 New Zealand had a larger amount of high school students with part-time employment in 2016 with a difference of 2,000. While, Fiji’s difference was much greater with 3,000.
🔸 However, Australia had a differents trend, where they had lower figures in 2016 (11,000) compared to 2008 (5,000)
Source: ielts.idp.com⁉️
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