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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Task 2
Several people have not been feeling secure, both inside and outside their homes. This problem is caused by some factors and that problem may be solved in particular ways.

There are several reasons why people face serious risks. Firstly, climate change is happening all around the world, and people may face the danger of natural disasters even when they are at home. For example, in foreign countries, many natural disasters such as earthquakes occur, leading to numerous casualties.

Moreover, these problems may be tackled as new technologies improve and help minimize the damages caused by natural disasters. For instance, scientists have developed new machines, such as satellites, for predicting the weather that can protect people from disasters.

In conclusion, I believe that the mentioned new technology can certainly help people live safer lives.

Here is the IELTS band score estimation for the provided response:

- Task Achievement/Response: 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
- Lexical Resource: 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7.0

The overall band score for this response would likely be around 7.0 to 7.5, considering the coherent narrative and the effective communication of the changes observed on the map.

The map shows how changes have been in Felixstone between 1967 and 2001.

Overall, there was several changes have been in Felixstone while ne areas have been built the removal of previus buildings.

In 1967, there was a large farmland area in the nourth east side. By 2001, this area had been completely redeveloped and replaced by ane hotel with a swimming pool and tennis courts. Also fish market had been demolished and private beach has been constructed instead if it in the east side of the map.

Moreover, the marina and pier had been located in the south side that has been turned into public beach. Additionally, wind turbines has been built to the south side, and car park has been constructed in the hotel area while other places (cafe, golf course and dunes )haven't changed in 2001.

Here is the IELTS band score estimation for the provided response:

- Task Achievement/Response: 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
- Lexical Resource: 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7.0

The overall band score for this response is estimated to be around 7.0, considering the balance of strengths and areas for improvement in the response.

The map illustrates how the museum has been changed in years 1957 and 2007.

Looking from overall perspective, the building has been become much larger while the number of new spaces have been constructed instead of some trees.

In 1957, the south side of the map, there was road for leading up to the museum that's one side was surrounded by trees. By 2007, all trees have been removed from the roadside while car park has been replaced by it. Besides, the garden hasn't changed from it's own location in nourth west side of map.

Moreover, the museum's section has been expanded to the nourth side and the museum shop has been built from the enterance while local history room has been relocated and become much larger in the middle of the museum. Additionally,the cafe and reception have been constructed in the east side of the building. The national history exhibition has been replaced by special exhibition and education center in the nourth side while the reception area has been constructed in the south side of the museum.

Here is the IELTS band score estimation for the provided response:

- Task Achievement/Response: 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
- Lexical Resource: 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 7.0

The overall band score for this response is estimated to be approximately 7.0 to 7.5, considering the balance of strengths and areas for improvement in the response.

The map shows how the Science park has been changed since 2008 and today.

Looking from overall perspective, the Science park has been improved and modernized while some new spaces have been constructed in nouthern side of the park in present.

In 2008, the nouthern part of the map there was untouched land with several trees. Now, the place for research and development has been constructed instead of it. The offices have been located in nourth-east side of the map and also reception was near of it. The reception area has been replaced by University hub while offices haven't changed as well as business units are located in west side of the park.

Moreover, in the southern section of the park, the circular IT centre has been turned into Innovation centre and new station has been built in the southern side while car park and cyber security have been expanded in their own locations.

The map shows how the Grance park has been changed in since 1920 and today.

Overall, it is vividly seen that the Grance park has been developed and some places are replaced instead of old ones while new spaces are constructed and modernized in present days.

In 1920, there were two gates for entering at the nourth and south sides. Also there was a stage for musicians in the west side of the map while fountain was located in the middle of the park while seats and rose gardens heve been become around the park. Now, the fountain has been removed in favour of a rose garden that has been surrounded by seats. To the west side of the new garden, the previous stage for musicians have been turned into a much larger Amphitheatre for concerts also reaction area has been added to it. Again one of the rose garden has been preserved in the west side of the park.

Moreover, the pond for water plants have been replaced by children's play area in the nourth east side of the park while a cafe has been constructed near of it. the grasshouse has been changed into water fuature in the south east side of the park. Besides, an underground car park has been built on the south east side of the park.

The map illustrates the changes to a park in years 1980 and present.

Overall, it is vividly seen that the park has become more developed for visitors while all spaces have been modernized and constructed which are outdoor eating, seating, and playing.

In 1980, there was entrance on the left side above a pond surrounded by benches and second gate at the bottom of the park. Now, both gates are disappeared and the pond has more benches around it. There are also two additional roads constructed instead of gates while chairs, desks, and barbecue are repleced to the half of this area with trees.

In the bottom right corner of the map, the flowers are replaced by play ground while a second space for flowers below the pond has replaced by bush in the bottom left corner of the map.

The map illustrate how an island has modified the tourist opportunities in past and future.

Overall, there have been notable changes in the island in term of accommodation and opportunities for visitors. It is remarkable that these buildings constructed without demaging to the trees.

Regarding the first map, that is over 1200 metres while it's width varies about 200 to 500 metres in different places. And there were several trees in the eastern and western sides while there wasn't any building.

Turning to the second map, that has been developed and supplied with swimming facilities, and the western woodland is surrounded by a series of huts which are attached the each other. Moreover, restaurant is constructed in the northern part which is connected to reception building in the island's dead of centr. Also new pier constructed with footpaths and vehicle tracks in the island.

The map illustrates how a university sports courts area has changed in the years 1990 and present.
Overall, the number of total sport courts for tennis and basketball has developed at the expense of park and car park, while other sport courts are relocated.
In 1990, on the left side of the map there was a park with trees and grass while car park was located near of the park. Now, the park was replaced by basketball court and the car park by 4 tennis courts.
On the right side of the map, an area contained the variety of sport courts which are outdoor pool, cafe and reception. The changing room and tennis courts were located south east of the map in 1990. In present, the outdoor pool has been changed into indoor pool while cafe and reception haven't modified. The changing room and fitnes centre have been replaced two tennis courts the south side of the map.