Urinboev Jasur

How to write Band 9.0 Essay?

1. Understand the Task 🧐:

Answer the question fully: It's crucial to respond to all parts of the prompt. If you're asked to discuss different perspectives and give your opinion, make sure you do both. ✅

Stay focused: Don’t wander off-topic. Each paragraph should be directly related to the question you're addressing. 🎯


2. Introduction ✍️:

Paraphrase the question: Start by rewording the prompt in your own words to show you fully understand it. 🔄

State your opinion (if asked): If the question requires it, make your viewpoint clear in the introduction. 💬

Preview the main points: Briefly outline the structure of your essay so the reader knows what to expect. 📜


3. Body Paragraphs 🧠:

Clear topic sentences: Start each paragraph with a sentence that clearly introduces the main idea of that paragraph. 📌

Expand on your ideas: Give detailed explanations, examples, and reasons to fully develop your arguments. This shows you can think critically. 💡

Use linking words: Words like “for example,” “in addition,” “however,” and “on the other hand” help your ideas flow smoothly. 🔗

Stay balanced: If you’re asked to discuss both sides of an argument, make sure you address each one equally before concluding with your opinion. ⚖️


4. Vocabulary 📚:

Use a range of vocabulary: Try to vary your word choice to avoid repetition. This will show you have a good command of the language. 🧑‍🏫

Use less common words: If you can, try using some more advanced vocabulary that’s appropriate for the topic. 📈

Be precise: Use words that are exact and appropriate for the context, and avoid vague or overly simple terms. 🎯


5. Grammar 📝:

Vary your sentence structures: Incorporate different sentence types—simple, compound, and complex—to show your grammatical flexibility. ✒️

Be accurate: Avoid mistakes in subject-verb agreement, tenses, and articles. Precision in grammar is key. ✔️

Use punctuation properly: Correct punctuation makes your writing clearer and easier to understand. 🖋️


6. Conclusion 🔚:

Summarize your main points: Briefly go over the key points you've made in the essay. 🗒️

Restate your opinion (if needed): Reinforce your viewpoint if the question asked for your opinion. 🗣️

Don’t introduce new ideas: The conclusion should wrap up your essay, not bring up any new arguments. 🚫


7. Coherence and Cohesion 🔗:

Ensure a logical flow: Your essay should have a clear and logical structure, making it easy for the reader to follow your ideas. 🚶‍♂️

Use linking devices: Use phrases like “firstly,” “therefore,” and “moreover” to guide the reader through your argument. 🔄


8. Word Count 📏:

Stick to the word count: Make sure your essay is at least 250 words for Task 2. Writing too little can cost you valuable points. 🖋️

By focusing on these elements, you’ll be able to craft a clear, well-organized essay that meets the high expectations of a Band 9.0. Keep practicing and refining your skills to achieve your desired score! 📈📑

✨Word of the day.

🇻🇬Give in = Yield
🇺🇿Taslim bo'lish, rozi bo'lish.

〽️The workers gave in after weeks of negotiation and accepted the company’s offer.

〽️Ishchilar bir necha haftalik muzokaralardan keyin yon berishdi va kompaniyaning taklifini qabul qilishdi.

#Letter

🔰Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat in your letter
Explain the reason for the noise
Apologise
Describe what action you will take

Dear neighbours,

I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).

First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise. I have several workers in my house/flat. They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old.

To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble. I hope you will forgive me for this.

Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud. I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible.

Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions. Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future

Yoursfaithfully
Aliyev vali



❗️"I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).
✅"I am writing to sincerely apologise for the noise from my house/flat and any inconvenience this may have caused you."

❌: "First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise."
✅: "First of all, I would like to explain the reasons for the noise."

❌: "They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old."
✅: "I have several workers in my house/flat who are making some changes to my kitchen. They are using various cutting and sawing tools, which are causing a lot of noise, as some of the tools are quite old."

❌: "To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble."
✅: "To be honest, I was unaware of the noise and sincerely apologise for the trouble it has caused."


❗️"I hope you will forgive me for this."
✅ "I hope you will forgive me for this oversight."

❌: "Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud."
✅: "After careful consideration, I have come up with a solution: to reduce the noise level as much as possible."

❌: "I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible."
✅: "I have asked the workers to work at night and to use electric tools whenever possible to minimize the noise."

❗️"Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions."
✅ "Once again, I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience or disturbance caused by my actions."

❗️"Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future."
✅ "Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise again in the future."

❌: "Yoursfaithfully"
✅: "Yours faithfully"

🔆OVERALL BAND SCORE 18/24

❄️Slush - Partially melted snow, often mixed with water, that is wet and mushy.

✅Example: "The roads were covered in slush after the snowfall started to melt."