#Letter
Dear neighbours,
I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).
First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise. I have several workers in my house/flat. They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old.
To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble. I hope you will forgive me for this.
Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud. I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible.
Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions. Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future
Yoursfaithfully
Aliyev vali
❗️"I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).
✅"I am writing to sincerely apologise for the noise from my house/flat and any inconvenience this may have caused you."
❌: "First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise."
✅: "First of all, I would like to explain the reasons for the noise."
❌: "They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old."
✅: "I have several workers in my house/flat who are making some changes to my kitchen. They are using various cutting and sawing tools, which are causing a lot of noise, as some of the tools are quite old."
❌: "To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble."
✅: "To be honest, I was unaware of the noise and sincerely apologise for the trouble it has caused."
❗️"I hope you will forgive me for this."
✅ "I hope you will forgive me for this oversight."
❌: "Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud."
✅: "After careful consideration, I have come up with a solution: to reduce the noise level as much as possible."
❌: "I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible."
✅: "I have asked the workers to work at night and to use electric tools whenever possible to minimize the noise."
❗️"Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions."
✅ "Once again, I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience or disturbance caused by my actions."
❗️"Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future."
✅ "Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise again in the future."
❌: "Yoursfaithfully"
✅: "Yours faithfully"
🔆OVERALL BAND SCORE 18/24
🔰Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat in your letter
Explain the reason for the noise
Apologise
Describe what action you will take
Dear neighbours,
I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).
First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise. I have several workers in my house/flat. They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old.
To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble. I hope you will forgive me for this.
Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud. I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible.
Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions. Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future
Yoursfaithfully
Aliyev vali
❗️"I am writing to sincerely apologise for noise from my house/flat (and any inconvenience this may have caused you).
✅"I am writing to sincerely apologise for the noise from my house/flat and any inconvenience this may have caused you."
❌: "First of all, I explain the reasons for the noise."
✅: "First of all, I would like to explain the reasons for the noise."
❌: "They are making some changes to my kitchen. Workers are using various cutting and sawing tools and making a lot of noise because they are very old."
✅: "I have several workers in my house/flat who are making some changes to my kitchen. They are using various cutting and sawing tools, which are causing a lot of noise, as some of the tools are quite old."
❌: "To be honest, I didn’t know that noise was happening and apologise for the trouble."
✅: "To be honest, I was unaware of the noise and sincerely apologise for the trouble it has caused."
❗️"I hope you will forgive me for this."
✅ "I hope you will forgive me for this oversight."
❌: "Given those things, I thought a lot about how to solve these problems. And finally, I found a solution to these problems: so the solution is to stop it being so loud."
✅: "After careful consideration, I have come up with a solution: to reduce the noise level as much as possible."
❌: "I persuade workers to work at night and use electric devices as much as possible."
✅: "I have asked the workers to work at night and to use electric tools whenever possible to minimize the noise."
❗️"Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience or harm caused by my actions."
✅ "Once again, I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience or disturbance caused by my actions."
❗️"Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise in the future."
✅ "Please know that I am fully committed to ensuring that such situations do not arise again in the future."
❌: "Yoursfaithfully"
✅: "Yours faithfully"
🔆OVERALL BAND SCORE 18/24